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The diagram illustrates how the reported number of influenza in people over 65 changed in a special village in the UK from 1985 to 1995

The diagram illustrates how the reported number of influenza in people over 65 changed in a special village in the UK from 1985 to 1995 1oPYX

Overall, In general, , we have a wide fluctuated in this diagram until the end of the year. The highest figure was related to 1991 while the lowest one belonged to 1985 Besides, it can be observed that we had a decline before we had a dramatic growth We had a decline before having a dramatic growth In the first year, the figure stood at 40 people and grew moderately to reach about 55 in 1987. However, this upward trend was broken and declined considerably over the next 2 years to reach a little less tha006E 50 cases in 1989. After that, we had a significant rose and the figure peaked at 75 people 1991. When the diagram declined for, about 1 years, We had a slight rise and then it went down again before finally reach 60 cases in the end of the survey

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