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The maps below show the various developments to Felixstone Town over a course of 34 years from 1967 to 2001

The maps below show the various developments to Felixstone Town over a course of 34 years from 1967 to 2001 pK9L9
The maps below show the various developments to Felixstone Town over a course of 34 years from 1967 to 2001 Overall, the golf course, the shop, the dunes, the cafe and the high street are still the same and haven't changed much. You can see other structures have changed more compared to 2001. They have been updated and replaced with more convenient and spacious options: the farmland, fish market and the hotels. The hotel was expanded to include a car park in 2001. The fish market, the marina and the pier were combined into 2 parts: public beach and private beach. Wind turbines can be seen behind the dunes. Another change is a resort include: hotel, swimming pool, and 2 tennis courts was built in the farmland. Inclusion, the buildings, the structures are much more modern and adaptable than they were in 2001.
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the various developments to
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Felixstone
Town over a course of 34 years from 1967 to 2001

Overall
, the golf course, the shop, the dunes, the
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cafe
and the high street are
still
the same and haven't
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changed
much. You can
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see
other structures have
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changed
more compared to 2001. They have
been updated
and replaced with more convenient and spacious options: the farmland, fish market and the hotels.

The hotel
was expanded
to include a car park in 2001. The fish market, the marina and the pier
were combined
into 2 parts: public beach and private beach. Wind turbines can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
behind the dunes. Another
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
is a resort include: hotel, swimming pool, and 2 tennis courts
was built
in the farmland.

Inclusion, the buildings, the structures are much more modern and adaptable than they were in 2001.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the various developments to Felixstone Town over a course of 34 years from 1967 to 2001

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