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the diagram illustrates growth of a frog. Overall, this production conclude seven steps, a adult frog comes from a egg, which is very first life stage of frog underwater.

the diagram illustrates growth of a frog. Overall, this production conclude seven steps, a adult frog comes from a egg, which is very first life stage of frog underwater. rYejN
the diagram illustrates growth of a frog. Overall, this production conclude seven steps, a adult frog comes from a egg, which is very first life stage of frog underwater. initially, tadpole which is cultivated from a egg, increase in its size during the span of three stages, this stages only have eyes of the eyes of frog. After becoming a fully grown tadpole, legs fronts legs starts to expanding. Subsequently, after reaching a certain age, tadpole begins pulmonary breathing from outside atmosphere. after turning into a fully evolved baby frog, it finally, able to leave water to experience land outside. but, rear part of frog is still fully expose, which competes in its adulthood, in this frog cultivate all part of it's bodythis entire establishment of frog happens in water, after turning into a adult frog can go outside.
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a
adult
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egg, increase in its size during the span of three stages, this stages
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. After becoming a
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grown tadpole, legs fronts legs
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, after reaching a certain age, tadpole
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pulmonary breathing from outside atmosphere.
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turning into a
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, it
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, able to
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leave
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but
, rear part of
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is
still
fully
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cultivate all part of it's
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adult
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can go outside.
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IELTS academic the diagram illustrates growth of a frog. Overall, this production conclude seven steps, a adult frog comes from a egg, which is very first life stage of frog underwater.

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