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The diagram illustrates different stages of the development of a tourist resort.

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The diagram illustrates different stages of the development of a tourist resort. At first, new hotels are constructed and employ staff for their operations. They also create the basis for local businesses and suppliers which in turn support the construction of new hotels. The expansion of such companies, as well as the opening of new hotels, attracts more businesses to the neighborhood. Workers from these newly arrived companies and hotels raise the area's tax and revenue, which helps to develop the job market. When local services and new business arrivals indirectly generate more jobs for the resort, the same effect is achieved. The profits are then utilized to improve infrastructure and the quality of tourism services, as well as to promote the hotel industry's image. When the area becomes well-known, more profits and revenue are expected for reinvesting into building up new hotels. However, in reinvestment into expansion plans, some money is lost through leakages. In general, the development of a tourist resort follows a complicated process in which numerous components work together to improve the area in various aspects.
The diagram illustrates
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different
stages of the development of a tourist resort.

At
first
,
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new
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hotels
are constructed
and employ staff for their operations. They
also
create the basis for local businesses and suppliers which in turn support the construction of
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new
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hotels
. The expansion of such
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companies
,
as well
as the opening of
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new
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hotels
, attracts more businesses to the neighborhood. Workers from these
newly
arrived
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companies
and
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hotels
raise the area's tax and revenue, which
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helps
to develop the job market. When local services and
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new
business arrivals
indirectly
generate more jobs for the resort, the same effect
is achieved
. The profits are then utilized to
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improve
infrastructure and the quality of tourism services,
as well
as to promote the
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hotel
industry's image. When the area becomes well-known, more profits and revenue are
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expected
for reinvesting into building up
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new
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hotels
.
However
, in reinvestment into expansion plans,
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some
money
is lost
through leakages.

In general
, the development of a tourist resort follows a complicated process in which numerous components work together to
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improve
the area in various aspects.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates different stages of the development of a tourist resort.

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3 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
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