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in some country crime is increase day by day how to sole it

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Nowadays crime rate is increasing day by day in whole world. There are different kinds of crime in our countries like cyber crime and steal money from other person. Government should reduce this types of crime in our country. Then our citizen feel relex in our houses on the other the hand, in a develop city the crime rate is increased faster, because that in country have a good technology and people of that country used and some of use this technology for their own then develop crime in city which is not good for people who live that country. Moreover, there are steal money from rich people. I think this is not good for next generation Furthermore, government should reduce this garbage from their own country if they not take any step for reduce crime then it create lots of problems for people who live there. Government will make rules in our country if any one break that rules then they will give fine to government, so think that is good for our citizen as well as government government also all the site and apps which they can use for hacking and then steal a money from people account In conculsion, crime rate is increase swifty in all countries. cyber crime is dangerous for people who have smartphone they are hack their cellphone and release all money from their account. so i think government should ban all apps and website from internet
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IELTS academic in some country crime is increase day by day how to sole it

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