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The diagram illustrates data about how to process of the water treatment.There are ten stages in the process of water treatment.

The diagram illustrates data about how to process of the water treatment. There are ten stages in the process of water treatment. QwBjx
The flow of the water pass intakes screens and than pumps. Before the flocculation water mix with peloniyam chloride and oxieams. In the flocculation commonly of sediment from a fluid. After removal fluid water store in the settling basin. In addition, chlorine add in the water. Next, water filterized in filter membrane and than in the disinfection water divided chlorine, sodium hydroxide and floride and last flow of the water is faucet. As a result, the whole process is benefit of our and it use drink water.
The flow of the
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pass intakes screens and
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flocculation
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mix with
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oxieams
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flocculation
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removal fluid
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store in the settling basin.
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,
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filterized
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in the disinfection
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divided chlorine, sodium hydroxide and
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floride
and last flow of the
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is faucet.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates data about how to process of the water treatment. There are ten stages in the process of water treatment.

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