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The diagram illustrates data about how to process of the water treatment.There are ten stages in the process of water treatment.

The diagram illustrates data about how to process of the water treatment. There are ten stages in the process of water treatment. QwBjx
The flow of the water pass intakes screens and than pumps. Before the flocculation water mix with peloniyam chloride and oxieams. In the flocculation commonly of sediment from a fluid. After removal fluid water store in the settling basin. In addition, chlorine add in the water. Next, water filterized in filter membrane and than in the disinfection water divided chlorine, sodium hydroxide and floride and last flow of the water is faucet. As a result, the whole process is benefit of our and it use drink water.
The flow of the
water
pass intakes screens and
than
pumps.
Before
the
flocculation
water
mix with
peloniyam
chloride and
oxieams
. In the
flocculation
commonly
of sediment from a fluid.
After
removal fluid
water
store in the settling basin.
In addition
, chlorine
add
in the
water
.
Next
,
water
filterized
in filter membrane and
than
in the disinfection
water
divided chlorine, sodium hydroxide and
floride
and last flow of the
water
is faucet.
As a result
, the whole process is benefit of our and it
use
drink
water
.
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