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The charts give information about two genres/ categories of TV programs watched by men and women

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The charts illustrate the TV programs that watched by Australian men and women and different age groups watch. Overall, it is apparent that men tend to watch more game shows on television than women. On the other hand, The people who watch the most television are in the 45+ age group. To begin with reality shows, In Australia, 37% of males watch Reality shows which are about half of the percentage of women watching reality shows. The ratio is inclined with age groups, 51% of 16-24 age group people and about 60% to 65% from 25 to 44 age group people watch reality shows. Most significant percentage of the 45s watch reality shows. Furthermore, with games shows, On the other hand, almost the same percentage of men and women watch Game TV programs amounting to 61% male and 60% female. The lowest proportion of 25 to 44-year-old people are interested in games shows. Just over 50% of 16-25 year-olds prefer to watch Game shows. People over 45 years old like games programs; that’s why nearly 70% of people spend their time on Game shows in Australia.
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