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The table chart compares and contrast the posts held by females in parliament and management in 5 nations during the period of 2000.

The table chart compares and contrast the posts held by females in parliament and management in 5 nations during the period of 2000. j9Laa
Overall, it can be seen that maximum females took part in Canada for parliament position whereas highest ratio of women held for management post. To begin with, almost similar ratio of Canadian and Egyptian women took part in parliament post which was near about half, but in Italy the ratio of women was decreased by 10%. Almost one tenth Rome women held a parliament post. 23% Ukraine women took part for government seats. On the other hand, maximum Rome females took part for management that was 52% however, almost similar numbers of Canadian and Egyptian women posts held by management field. A quarter Italian woman took part in management post.
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