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The bar chart demonstrates people of the UK and France were spent money on various types of goods such as cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras in year of 2010. The scale is in pounds sterling. Overall, the UK is most popular in buying stuff among the goods except computers and perfume. While cars were most bought by people of the UK, computers were bought by inhabitant of France. To begin with, people of the UK spent money on cars around 450000 pounds sterling, whereas people of France spent nearly 400000 pounds sterling in cars. Furthermore, expenditure on books and camera were roughly 401000 and 351000 pounds sterling by consumer of the UK. Where, 300000 and 150000 pounds sterling were spent by habitant of France. However, money used for computers and perfume were 355000 and 200000 pounds sterling respectively by France people. Whereas, only 350000 and 1460000 pounds sterling were spent by the UK society, in 2010.
The bar chart demonstrates
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spent
money on various types of
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goods
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cars
, computers, books, perfume and cameras in year of 2010. The scale is in pounds sterling.

Overall
, the UK is most popular in buying stuff among the
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goods
except computers and perfume. While
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cars
were most
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bought
by
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people
of the UK, computers were
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bought
by inhabitant of France.

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people
of the UK
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spent
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cars
around
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450000 pounds
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sterling
, whereas
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people
of France
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spent
nearly
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400000 pounds
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sterling
in
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cars
.
Furthermore
, expenditure on books and camera were roughly 401000 and
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351000 pounds
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sterling
by consumer of the UK. Where, 300000 and
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150000 pounds
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sterling
were
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spent
by habitant of France.

However
, money
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used
for computers and perfume were 355000 and
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200000 pounds
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sterling
respectively
by France
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people
. Whereas,
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only
350000 and
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1460000 pounds
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sterling
were
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spent
by the UK society, in 2010.
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IELTS academic nungha saonhinhoaiz dungnhinnua kechanodi

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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