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The contribution of various Economic Sector to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017, and 208

The contribution of various Economic Sector to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017, and 208 YyDOj
The percentage of the distributions of Xcountry gross domestic product across agriculture, industry, and service sectors between 2016 and 2018 is presented in the table. Overall, an increase in the percentage of GDP contribution in Xcountry was seen in agriculture and industry sectors, while GDP in service sector showed downward trend. Futhermore, service area was achieved the biggest contributor to GDP. The GDP in Service section stood at 65% in 2016, and there was a sharp decrease to 64% in the following year. In 2018, the proportion of GDP service sector minimally declined by nearly 10%. However, it always became highest distribution of Xcountry GDP. By contrast, 1960 and 2010 saw an oscillation figure for agriculture area and an increase figure for industry area, showing upward trend. Although, industry sector only contributed 22% to total GDP in 2016, the proportion slightly rose to 25% and 30% running in the next two years. Moreover, agriculture zone had the lowest place for GDP contribution. Stood at 13% in 2016, the percentage of GDP in industry sector even gradually reduced to 11% in 2017, but there was a sharp rise in 2018 to 15%.
The percentage of the distributions of
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Xcountry
gross domestic product across
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agriculture
,
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industry
, and
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service
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sectors
between 2016 and 2018
is presented
in the table.

Overall
, an increase in the percentage of GDP contribution in
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Xcountry
was
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seen
in
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agriculture
and
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industry
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sectors
, while GDP in
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service
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sector
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showed
downward trend.
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Futhermore
,
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service
area
was achieved
the biggest contributor to GDP.

The GDP in
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Service
section stood at 65% in 2016, and there was a sharp decrease to 64% in the following year. In 2018, the proportion of GDP
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service
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sector
minimally
declined by
nearly
10%.
However
, it always became
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highest
distribution of
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Xcountry
GDP.

By contrast, 1960 and 2010
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saw
an oscillation figure for
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agriculture
area and an increase figure for
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industry
area, showing upward trend. Although,
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industry
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sector
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only
contributed 22% to total GDP in 2016, the proportion
slightly
rose to 25% and 30% running in the
next
two years.
Moreover
,
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agriculture
zone had the lowest place for GDP contribution. Stood at 13% in 2016, the percentage of GDP in
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industry
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sector
even
gradually
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reduced
to 11% in 2017,
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but
there was a sharp rise in 2018 to 15%.
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IELTS academic The contribution of various Economic Sector to Xcountry Gross Domestic Product in 2016, 2017, and 208

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