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The bar chart provides information about the top most paid countries in spending on travel in 2014.

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Overall, the china reaches the top of lending on travel while next to it are USA and Germany with a constant percentages, and then United Kingdom followed by the South East Asia country followed by order from highest to lowest expenditure (Singapore, South Korea, Hong Kong, India, Malaysia and Taiwan). China, with the highest rate among the countries who passes 110% over all. USA and Germany has a constant level arrived about eighty two percent while 60% for the United Kingdom that has plunge only Europe country. In contrast, with the following group that band to low sales Singapore aiming approximately 23% after that Singapore and Hongkong gaining with the similar exact net about twenty percent were at India, Malaysia and Taiwan fell to decreased of 18%, 15% and 10%.
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, the china reaches the top of lending on travel while
next
to it are USA and Germany with a constant
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percentages
, and then United Kingdom followed by the South East Asia country followed by order from highest to
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lowest
expenditure (Singapore, South Korea, Hong Kong, India, Malaysia and Taiwan).

China, with the highest rate among the countries who
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passes
110% over all. USA and Germany has a constant level arrived about
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eighty two
percent while 60% for the United Kingdom that has plunge
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Europe country.

In contrast
, with the following group that band to low sales Singapore aiming approximately 23% after that Singapore and
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Hongkong
gaining with the similar exact net about twenty percent were at India, Malaysia and Taiwan fell to decreased of 18%, 15% and 10%.
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