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divroces rate in two countries in 2012 to 2015

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The bar chart illustrates infromation about the percentage of divroce in Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015. All in all, Sweden experinced a downward trend, while Finland showed an upward trend during the period given. It is clear from the chart that Sweden divroce rate was about 45. /. in 2011 which was higher than Finland divroce rate. The divroce rate in Sweden increased slightly in 2012 reaching 50. /. . It is interesting to notice that after the year 2012 the divroce rate in Sweden decreased gradually untill it reached to 33. /. By contrast, the percentage of divroce in Finland was less than 40. /. in 2011 and it declined to 31. /. in 2012. Moreover, this figure witnessed a steady groth in the next year. It rose to approximately 39. /. in 2013 and 43. /. in 2014. In conclusion, people in Sweden suffered from this problem more than Finland.
The bar chart illustrates
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about the percentage of
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divroce
in Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015. All in all, Sweden
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experinced
a downward trend, while Finland
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an upward trend during the period
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clear
from the chart that Sweden
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divroce
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rate
was about 45. /.
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in
2011 which was higher than Finland
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divroce
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rate
. The
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divroce
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rate
in Sweden increased
slightly
in 2012 reaching 50. /.
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It is interesting to notice that after the year 2012 the
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divroce
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rate
in Sweden decreased
gradually
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untill
it reached to 33. /. By contrast, the percentage of
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divroce
in Finland was less than 40. /.
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in
2011 and it declined to 31. /.
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in
2012.
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groth
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2013 and 43. /.
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2014.

In conclusion
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people
in Sweden suffered from this problem more than Finland.
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IELTS academic divroces rate in two countries in 2012 to 2015

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