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The diagram highlights the process by which hydro-electric power is generated.

The diagram highlights the process by which hydro-electric power is generated. Overall, the process include a lot of stages, beginning with the evaporation of sea water which go through sophisticated steps to manufacture hydro-electricity for usage. The first step is that the sea water is evaporated by the sun heat, which transforms clouds. As soon as clouds are heavy enough, water drops out of the cloud, which create rain. The amount of rainfall is stored in a reservoir and then it is blocked by a huge dam. The next step is that the water flows rapidly through a valve that can be opened or closed to a turbine to create power. Whereas, the remain water is transferred to a pump and then it is returned to the reservoir for the next use. After that, energy from high voltage cables is transferred to transformer station where the electricity is delivered to hospitals, schools, factories and houses by underground cables.

The diagram highlights the process by which hydro-electric power is generated
.

Overall
, the process include This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 stages, beginning with the evaporation of sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 which go through sophisticated steps to manufacture hydro-electricity for usage.

The first
 step is that the sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is evaporated
 by the sun heat, which transforms clouds. As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as clouds are heavy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 drops out of the cloud, which create rain. The amount of rainfall is stored
 in a Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).reservoir, and
reservoir and
 then it is blocked
 by a huge dam. The next
 step is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 flows rapidly
 through a valve that can be opened
 or closed to a turbine to create power. Whereas, After ‘the’, do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of ‘remain’ is correct. If ‘remain’ is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the remain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is transferred
 to a Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).pump, and
pump and
 then it is returned
 to the reservoir for the next
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

After that, energy from high voltage cables is transferred
 to transformer station where the electricity is delivered
 to hospitals, schools, factories and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 by underground cables. 