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The bar chat shows the number of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a Uk university in 2009

The bar chart shows that in 2009 both genders research on students studying related to science at UK. It is clear that both genders went through an erratic period and else they rose and fell erratically. The highest indicator was related to Bialogy among the others in both genders. On Bialogy, compared to women students, the change in men students was more dramatic. They made up under 250. As regard womens students, grew to 200. Unlike the others, on Physics, the lowest indicator was related to men. The number of men fell noticably compared to women. Unlike Bialogy and Medicine, on Astronomy and Geology went down by 100. The most striking feature this is that solely on Vetinary Medicine, women students increased steadily in comparison to men students. Women research student constituted of over 100
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IELTS academic The bar chat shows the number of male and female research students studying six science-related subjects at a Uk university in 2009

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