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The diagram gives information about the process of making tomato ketchup.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The diagram gives information about the process of making tomato ketchup. Overall, it can be clearly seen that there are 15 steps in the procedure, beginning with picking and putting tomatoes in the basket and ending with eating food with ketchup. First of all, the farmer harvests and puts ripe tomatoes into baskets. Following that, tomatoes are separated into two different groups, which are decent and rotten ones. In the next stage, they are delivered to the factory in which stalk, seeds, and skin are removed. In the subsequent step, tomatoes are crushed and seasoned with sugar, vinegar, and salt. After that, people boil the mixture and wait for two hours. The mixture is now called ketchup, which is packed in the bottle and labeled. Before being delivered to supermarkets, ketchup is checked carefully. Finally, customers buy this from stores and use it with dishes such as hamburgers, and fries.

The diagram gives information about the process of making tomato ketchup.

Overall
, it can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are 15 steps in the procedure, beginning with picking and putting tomatoes in the basket and ending with eating food with ketchup.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the farmer harvests and puts ripe tomatoes into baskets. Following that, tomatoes are separated
 into two This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 groups, which are decent and rotten ones. In the next
 stage, they are delivered
 to the factory in which stalk, seeds, and skin are removed
. In the subsequent step, tomatoes are crushed
 and seasoned with sugar, vinegar, and salt. After that, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 boil the mixture and wait for two hours.

The mixture is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 called ketchup, which is packed
 in the bottle and labeled. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
being delivered
 to supermarkets, ketchup is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
carefully
. Finally
, customers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 this from stores and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it with dishes such as hamburgers, and fries. 