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the process describes how bees make honey.

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The diagram demonstrates the process illustrates how bees produce honey. There are seven main stages in the process of producing honey, beginning with getting nectar and ending with making honey. First, bees will leave the nest and find the flower's to get nectar. Then it will use the proboscis and suck nectar from the flowers. After that, the bees will bring the collected honey back to the hive. Next, it will put the newly obtained honey into the air cells inside the hive and the nectar will turn into honey by using their wings to fan out the air. In the sixth step, the bees will let the bile reduce vapor and appear as gas until it meets the standard. After a transition, the bees check and store honey for the winter. Finally, it have completed the process of taking honey and bringing people standard drops of honey
The diagram demonstrates the process illustrates how bees produce honey. There are seven main stages in the process of producing honey, beginning with getting
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nectar
and ending with making honey.

First
, bees will
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leave
the nest and find the flower's to
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get
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nectar
. Then it will
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use
the proboscis and suck
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nectar
from the flowers. After that, the bees will bring the collected honey back to the hive.
Next
, it will put the
newly
obtained honey into the air cells inside the hive and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
nectar
will turn into honey by using their wings to fan out the air.

In the sixth step, the bees will
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let
the bile
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reduce
vapor and appear as gas until it meets the standard. After a transition, the bees
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check
and store honey for the winter.
Finally
, it
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have
completed the process of taking honey and bringing
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people
standard drops of honey

IELTS academic the process describes how bees make honey.

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3 paragraphs
147 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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