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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks

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The given illustration depicts various steps involved in the production of carbonated drinks. Looking at the diagram more closely, it is readily evident that the process has an aggregate of 5 stages, starting with cleaning water and finishing with filtering and packaging. At the first stage, we can see that raw water has to undergo respectively a process including filtering, water softening, and interaction with chemicals. In the next step, the water is necessitated to interact with Carbon dioxide after being heated by electric heaters and cooled in the interval of time of passing a pipe to the CO2 tank. Thereupon, the water is mixed in a tank with a mixture of coloring, syrup as well as flavor. In the last step, water is filtered again before people start to use bottles and cans to fill and package them in boxes, which are afterward delivered by trucks to supermarkets for selling purposes.

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water
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use
 bottles and cans to fill and package them in boxes, which are afterward delivered by trucks to supermarkets for selling purposes. 