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The diagram below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

The diagram below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024. OVlyy

The two maps compare the school's campus as it was in 2004 with proposed site design changes for the year 20224. Overall, as can be seen in the 2024 the main change is the addition of a fresh school branch to increase the numbers of students. In 2004 the school can accommodate only 600 learners, and two departments of the school were separated by a path from the main entrance to sports field. Plans for 2024 are significantly increase the number of learners by 400 whole students will be around 1000. For that sport hall will be replaced to a new school building. In addition, for linking three school branches together, will be created a shorter pathway. Furthermore, the new car park and smaller new sports field than 2004 will be built instead of woodland. For that will be constructed the new road to the second park from the main entrance. Finally, nothing will be made to the main entrance. .

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