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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

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The diagram shows us the process of making carbonated drinks and how they sent for packaging. The process are divided into 5 stages, they are water cleaning, heating evapouration and carnation, mixing, filtering and filling and packaging. The first step is water cleaning, where the raw water is filtered in to a pipe and goes through a tank in which contains chemicals which helps to soften water. In heating evaporation and carbonation, the water flows through a pump in which the water is pushed into an electric heater and goes into a cooling pipe. Subsequently, the cooled water passes through a container containing carbon dioxide. During mixing, the carbonated water is passed through a mixing tank which adds colouring, syrup and flavor to the drink. Atlast the water is filtered than sent for filtering and filling process in which the drink are filled in bottles and wrapped in boxes. Finally the boxes are loaded in a truck and dispatched for supermarkets

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 us the process of making carbonated drinks and how they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 for packaging.

The process are divided
 into 5 stages, they are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 cleaning, heating Possible spelling mistake found.evaporation
evapouration
 and carnation, mixing, filtering and filling and packaging. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
first
 step is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 cleaning, where the raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is filtered
 in to a pipe and goes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 a tank in which contains chemicals which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to soften You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. In heating evaporation and carbonation, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 flows You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 a pump in which the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pushed
 into an electric heater and goes into a cooling pipe. Subsequently
, the cooled You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 passes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 a container containing carbon dioxide. During mixing, the carbonated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is passed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withover
through
 a mixing tank which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
Possible spelling mistake found.coloringco louring
colouring
, syrup and flavor to the drink. Possible spelling mistake found.AtlasAt last
Atlast
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is filtered
 than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 for filtering and filling process in which the drink are filled
 in bottles and wrapped in boxes. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 the boxes are loaded
 in a truck and dispatched for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsupermarkets.supermarkets!supermarkets?supermarkets:supermarkets,supermarkets;
supermarkets