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The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused

The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused EYXD

The illustrated diagram elucidates the information about the procedure of recycling of rainwater. Overall, it is noticed that there are three major steps in whole process. It initially starts with rain and ends with reuse of water. It is vividly clear, that the entire process is starts with rain on the roof of the house. Moreover, rain water is collected in tank with the help of pipes and then stored water is used in homes for domestic purpose. Also, some amount of water is came from Dam with the help of pipe line. In next stage, water is kept in treatment plant and after treatment water is transferred to house for different uses. Proceeding further, wastewater of a house is stored in wastewater treatment plant where it refines with the help of machine and refineries. After this, clean water which is fit for household procedure is sent to house with the help of pipes. Further more, excess treated water is expelled out into the rivers.

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