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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. VRAJ
The given illustration depicts the shows the stages of manufacturing carbonated beverages. Overall, there are five stages in producing these drinks starting from purifying the water, evaporation and carbonation, preparing the mixture to packaging and delivering the finished products. The first step starts with filtering the water with water softener and chemicals and ends with the clean water being pumped to the heaters. Then, the water is integrated in a large tank with CO2 after bring cooled in the cooling pipe, where the mixture will form bubles. This carbonated water then flows from a pipe to the mixing tank. In this step, the colour, flavour and syrup is added to the carbonated drink and mixed in the tank in circular motion. After the mixture is ready, they are filled into two different types of containers, bottles and cans, where they are the filtered again from mixing tank. The beverages are then packed into separate boxes which is shipped to department stores by the delivery truck.
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illustration depicts the
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shows
the stages of manufacturing carbonated beverages.

Overall
, there are five stages in producing these drinks starting from purifying the
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water
, evaporation and carbonation, preparing the mixture to packaging and delivering the finished products.

The
first
step
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starts
with filtering the
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water
with
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water
softener and chemicals and ends with the clean
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water
being pumped
to the heaters. Then, the
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water
is integrated
in a large
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tank
with CO2 after bring cooled in the cooling pipe, where the mixture will form
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bubles
.

This carbonated
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water
then flows from a pipe to the mixing
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tank
. In this step, the
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colour
,
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flavour
and syrup is
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added
to the carbonated drink and mixed in the
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tank
in circular motion. After the mixture is ready, they
are filled
into two
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different
types of containers, bottles and cans, where they are the filtered again from mixing
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tank
. The beverages are then packed into separate boxes which
is shipped
to department stores by the delivery truck.
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IELTS academic The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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