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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. 1Bl7

The image illustrates how are made sparkled drinks, the process is composed of 5 different stages. The first process concern in the cleaning of raw water that is filtered and than it is mixed with water softener and many other chimical agents. After that the water is pumped in an eletric heaters. With this high temperature water start to evaporate and this particles crossing a cooling pipe reach the place were they are mixed with carbon dioxide end where took place the carbonation. Thirdly the water goes to a mixing tank where it is added to colorant, syrup and flavours. With rotative mouvements all that componets are mixed and then newly filtered for get in the next step which consist in the filling of different packagings like bottle and can. Subsequently are collected many bottles or many cans is paper boxes for optimize the transportation to the supermarkets.

The image illustrates how are made
 sparkled drinks, the process is composed
 of 5 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages.

The first
 process concern in the cleaning of raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 that is filtered
 and Did you mean "then"?then
than
 it is mixed
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 softener and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 other Possible spelling mistake found.chemical
chimical
 agents. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 in an Possible spelling mistake found.electric
eletric
 heaters. With this high temperature You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 to evaporate and this particles crossing a cooling pipe reach the place were they are mixed
 with carbon dioxide This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 where took place the carbonation. Thirdly
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 goes to a mixing tank where it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to colorant, syrup and Possible spelling mistake. 'flavours' is British English.flavors
flavours
. With Possible spelling mistake found.relativerotationrotatingrotateputativestative
rotative
Possible spelling mistake found.movements
mouvements
 all that Possible spelling mistake found.componentscompo nets
componets
are mixed
 and then newly
 filtered for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 in the next
 step which consist in the filling of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Possible spelling mistake found.packagingpack agings
packagings
 like bottle and can. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Subsequently,
Subsequently
are collected
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 bottles or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 cans is paper boxes for optimize the transportation to the supermarkets. 