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The table depicts how many visitors that the Ashdown Museum welcomed in previous and following years of its renovation.

The table depicts how many visitors that the Ashdown Museum welcomed in previous and following years of its renovation. 15d7G

The table depicts how many visitors that the Ashdown Museum welcomed in previous and following years of its renovation. In addition to that, the pie charts illustrate the outcomes of the survey which is consisted of the proportions of contentedness levels of the visitors in the same years. It can be clearly seen that, in previous year, 74 thousand people visited the museum beforehand the refurbishments. Then, the amount increased by 18 thousand and reached up to 92 thousand after the museum has been refurbished. 40 people were dissatisfied in the year before the refurbishment. However, 15 people claimed that way as the museum was renovated. In contrast, the amount of those who were significantly satisfited with the museum jumped from 15 to 35. Additionally, the number of content people, in previous year, constituted twice as much as the amount people who were extremely satisfied. Likewise, 10 more people mentioned that they were very satisfied and the amount became 40. Extremely uncontent people made up one-tenth of the amount of the visitors but it halved after the processes becoming 5 people. It can be observed that, in both years, the amounts of those who avioded responding the survey were the same which is 5 people.

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