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The bar chart has shown the figures related to the total number of phone calls in the UK.The whole chart could be divided into three categories as different call types, recorded from1995 to 2002.

The bar chart has shown the figures related to the total number of phone calls in the UK. The whole chart could be divided into three categories as different call types, recorded from1995 to 2002. 2Rbg6
The chart illustrates the times spent on telephone by the UK residents between 1995 to 2002. Overall, It can be seen that the local calls has the significant amount of usage overall categories. Although, mobile calls had increased from 1995 to the following years. As seen from the chart, Local or fixed line calls in 1995 was 70 billion minutes and it rose to the highest peak in 1998 to 90 minutes (billions). Although It was steady during the following year in 1999, but the usage of local calls started to reduce till 2002. The time spent in national and international calls was almost half from local calls. In 1995, It was around 40 minutes (billions) and In 2002, it increased to 60 billion minutes. During the time between 1995 to 2002 national and inter national calls had a steady increasing trend. Although mobile calls were the lowest figure in 1995 around 5 billion minutes but during the following year mobile calls depicts a significant amount of usage. In 2002, It had almost 50 minutes (billions) in total usage of the UK residents
The chart illustrates the times spent on telephone by the UK residents
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, mobile
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had increased from 1995 to the following years. As
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in 1995 was 70
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minutes and it rose to the highest peak in 1998 to 90 minutes
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(billions)
. Although It was steady during the following year in 1999,
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till 2002. The time spent in national and international
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was almost half from
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local
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calls
. In 1995, It was around 40 minutes
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(billions)
and In 2002, it increased to 60
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minutes. During the time
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between 1995 to 2002
national and inter national
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calls
had a steady increasing trend. Although mobile
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calls
were the lowest figure in 1995 around 5
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billion
minutes
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during the following year mobile
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depicts a significant amount of
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usage
. In 2002, It had almost 50 minutes
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(billions)
in total
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of the UK
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residents
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IELTS academic The bar chart has shown the figures related to the total number of phone calls in the UK. The whole chart could be divided into three categories as different call types, recorded from1995 to 2002.

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