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The diagram explains how yogurt is made at a factory.there are eleven stages in the process by producing yogurt in factory.

The diagram explains how yogurt is made at a factory. there are eleven stages in the process by producing yogurt in factory. eRklA
To begin, the raw milk sent to the CEM SMART R, ORACLE and spriint for purpose to analysis of solid/fat/protein from raw milk after analysed raw milk, it passes to the adjust milk composition and blend ingredients to check the composition and ingredient then moves to pasteurizer, the process of pasteurizer is used to kill the bacteria from the milk after that milk get off to homogenization the process homogenization to becomes white colour then raw milk goes to cooler to cool the raw milk. After that cooled milk gives to the inoculate with starter cultures then the milk covey to the hold and cold, some samples sent to analyse solids, fats and proteins. Adding some flavours and fruits on yogurt to feel like tastes as good. Conclusion this is the process of producing yogurt in factory.
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analysed
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, it passes to
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composition and blend ingredients to
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check
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to pasteurizer, the process of pasteurizer is
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to kill the bacteria from the
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after that
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off to homogenization the process homogenization to becomes white
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then
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goes to cooler to cool the
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After that cooled
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gives to
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with starter cultures then the
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covey to the hold and
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samples
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solids, fats and proteins. Adding
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and fruits on yogurt to feel like tastes as
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Conclusion this is the process of producing yogurt in factory.
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IELTS academic The diagram explains how yogurt is made at a factory. there are eleven stages in the process by producing yogurt in factory.

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3 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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