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the graph below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000.

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The table graph illustrates information about the healthcare amenities provided in three European nations namely Austria, France and Sweden from 1980 to 2000. Having a cursery look at the graph, it is apparent that the maximum facilities provided by Sweden country, while in France, the number of doctor per 1000 people was inclined gradually in 1980, but the figure was dropped again in 2000. Surprisingly, the number of physicians per 1000 people contineousely increased 0. 8 in 1980 and 1. 0 in 2000 in Austria. Probing further, in 1980, in Austria, the number hospital beds per 1000 people dramatically increased from 1. 4 to 3. 7 in 1980 and 2000. It can be noticed that, the hospital facilities in Sweden, exacalty the from 1980 to 1990, which was 6. 4. however, the number rose to 6. 4 in 2000. Sucrutinizing further, in Austria and France 18 to 8 days and 9 to 5 days from 1980 to 2000 both were decreased throughout the given time period. Overall, it can be inferred from the graph is that the maximum number of healthcare in Sweden as campaired to other nations, Austria and France.
The table graph illustrates information about the healthcare amenities provided in three European nations
namely
Austria, France and Sweden from 1980 to 2000. Having a
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cursery
look at the graph, it is apparent that the maximum facilities provided by Sweden country, while in France, the
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number
of doctor per 1000
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people
was inclined
gradually
in 1980,
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but
the figure
was dropped
again in 2000.
Surprisingly
, the
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number
of physicians per 1000
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people
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contineousely
increased 0. 8 in 1980 and 1. 0 in 2000 in Austria. Probing
further
, in 1980, in Austria, the
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number
hospital beds per 1000
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people
dramatically
increased from 1. 4 to 3. 7 in 1980 and 2000. It can
be noticed
that, the hospital facilities in Sweden,
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exacalty
the
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from
1980 to 1990, which was 6. 4.
however
, the
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number
rose to 6. 4 in 2000.
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Sucrutinizing
further
, in Austria and France 18 to 8 days and 9 to 5 days from 1980 to 2000 both
were decreased
throughout the
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given
time period.
Overall
, it can
be inferred
from the graph is that the maximum
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of healthcare in Sweden as
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campaired
to other nations, Austria and France.
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