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The line graph illustrates the percentage of specific nation by age gather from 1960 to 2040.

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of specific nation by age gather from 1960 to 2040. Overall, both of under 14 years old group and age 15-64 declined slightly while the figure for the people aged more than 65 increased moderately over 80 years starting at 1960. At the beginning of the course, population by people who aged from 0 to 14, 15-64 years old group and people more than 65 years old stood at 30%, around 55% and 15% respectively. After 30 years, while the proportion of population by more than 65 saw a slight rise by 5%, a moderate fall in the figure for the rate of under 14 years old group to 20%. There was a gentle jump in the percentage of 15-64 years old people by 5%. Between 1990 and 2040, it is expected that the age group of 65+ can reach the highest point at about 45% whereas a sharp fall was seen in the figure for children from 0 to 14 and hit a lowest point at 10%. In the meantime, the percentage of people who are 15-64 years old witnessed a slight decrease by 15%. The green line overtook blue line and orange line at 45% and 20% respectively, in 2040 and 1990 respectively.
The
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graph illustrates the percentage of specific nation by age gather from 1960 to 2040.

Overall
, both of under 14 years
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old
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group
and age 15-64 declined
slightly
while the figure for the
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people
aged more than 65 increased
moderately
over 80 years starting at 1960.

At the beginning of the course, population by
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who aged from 0 to 14, 15-64 years
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old
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and
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people
more than 65 years
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stood at 30%, around 55% and 15%
respectively
. After 30 years, while the proportion of population by more than 65
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a slight rise by 5%, a moderate fall in the figure for the rate of under 14 years
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old
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to 20%. There was a gentle jump in the percentage of 15-64 years
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old
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people
by 5%.

Between 1990 and 2040, it is
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expected
that the age
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of 65+ can reach the highest point at about 45% whereas a sharp fall was
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seen
in the figure for children from 0 to 14 and hit
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lowest point at 10%. In the meantime, the percentage of
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who are 15-64 years
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witnessed a slight decrease by 15%. The green
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overtook blue
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and orange
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at 45% and 20%
respectively
, in 2040 and 1990
respectively
.
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