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This report derives from a bar chart which represents the number of students applications sent to three major US universities, for four distinct subjects measured in the period of twenty years. Broadly speaking, the Engineering department saw a significant increase in the year 1990 along with the Biology department which peaked in the same year. While the Business and social work section saw their drastic growth in the year 2010. A specific analysis shows that a gradual decrease of applicants in the Biology branch from 1990 to 2010, with more than double the drop of 1500, this trend further continued in the engineering section where we saw another severe decline from 4000 applicants to 500 in the run of twenty years. Although the 2000s saw only a mild downfall in both the departments, it was the 2010s that dropped severely. In contrast to the above, the Business and the Social work section saw a huge flip in their applicants throughout the 20 year time period. A drastic growth of more than double the increase was accomplished in the year 2010 compared to 1990. The numbers from Business and Social work grew to 4000 and 2000 respectively.
This report derives from a bar chart which represents the number of students applications
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to three major US universities, for four distinct subjects measured in the period of twenty years.

Broadly
speaking, the Engineering department
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saw
a significant increase in the
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year
1990 along with the Biology department which peaked in the same
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year
. While the Business and social work section
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saw
their drastic growth in the
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year
2010.

A specific analysis
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shows
that a gradual decrease of applicants in the Biology branch from 1990 to 2010, with more than double the drop of 1500, this trend
further
continued in the engineering section where we
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saw
another severe decline from 4000 applicants to 500 in the run of twenty years. Although the 2000s
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saw
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only
a mild downfall in both the departments, it was the 2010s that dropped
severely
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In contrast
to the above, the Business and the Social work section
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saw
a huge flip in their applicants throughout the 20
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year
time period. A drastic growth of more than double the increase
was accomplished
in the
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2010 compared to 1990. The numbers from Business and Social work grew to 4000 and 2000
respectively
.

IELTS academic applicantions to 3 US universitites

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