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The diagram describes the procedure of salvaging used glass bottles. Generally, there are three main stages in the process of resuing wasted bottles, beginning with collecting point and ending with newly recycled products ready for sale in the supermarket. To begin with, used glass bottles are collected and loaded on trucks and transported to recycling mill. After being gathered, they use high-pressure water for outside extraction, the cleaned bottles are then divided into three different categories, namely clear, green and brown respectively. In the next step, the bottles are taken to glass factory where they are crushed into glass pieces. Having been burning in furnace with high-temperture roughly 600 to 800 degrees, the glass turns to be recycled liquid glass- new liquid glass. At the following stage, the glass bottles have been fused, they are then shaped into glass mould and they become a new products. Finally, recycled glass bottles are then distributed back to supermarket where they are ready for sale, thereby continuing the process.
The diagram
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describes
the procedure of salvaging
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used
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glass
bottles.

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resuing
wasted
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bottles
, beginning with collecting point and ending with
newly
recycled products ready for sale in the supermarket.

To
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begin
with,
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used
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glass
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bottles
are collected
and loaded on trucks and transported to recycling mill. After
being gathered
, they
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use
high-pressure water for outside extraction, the cleaned
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bottles
are then divided into three
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different
categories,
namely
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clear
, green and brown
respectively
. In the
next
step, the
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bottles
are taken
to
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glass
factory where they
are crushed
into
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glass
pieces. Having been burning in furnace with
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high-temperture
roughly 600 to 800 degrees, the
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glass
turns to
be recycled
liquid
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glass-
new liquid glass.

At the following stage, the
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glass
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bottles
have
been fused
, they are then shaped into
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glass
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mould and
they become a new
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products
.
Finally
, recycled
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glass
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bottles
are then distributed back to supermarket where they are ready for sale, thereby continuing the process.
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