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The line graph illustrates the changes in three different kinds of crime in Panama City in the period from 2010 to 2019.

The line graph illustrates the changes in three different kinds of crime in Panama City in the period from 2010 to 2019. b3ADq
The line graph illustrates the changes in three different kinds of crime in Panama City in the period from 2010 to 2019. Overall, the number of burglary incidents in Panama city witnessed downward trend, whereas the stable trend was saw by the others. Although, in the beginning, the amount of burglary incidents dominated the research, in the last period, that figure for car theft became the most popular crime in Panama City. While robber remained as the least popular crime during nine years of the research. In 2010, the number of burglary incidents started with 3400 cases, which led burglary to be the most popular crime in that year. From 2010 to 2011, the quantity of burglary incidents increased moderately and reached a peak at 3700 cases in 2011. In the next four years, there is a dramatic decline in the amount of burglary incidents to just 1200, however, that figures are recovered to 1500 cases in 2016. During the last period, the number of incidents caused by burglary showed a fluctuation and reached a figure of 1400 cases in 2019. In 2010, the cases of car theft incidents were about 2700, which caused a large gap with 600 cases for the robbery incidents. In the next two years, there are a slight increase in the number of robbery incidents to about 1000 cases, while that figures for car theft remain stable compared to the beginning. From 2012 to 2015, both figures of car theft and robbery followed a decreasing trend and reached 2200 and 600 cases respectively in 2015. In the last four years, there was nearly a parallel run from two kinds of crime and reached a similar figure in 2019 when compared to the beginning.
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in Panama City in the period from 2010 to 2019.

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witnessed downward trend, whereas the stable trend was
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burglary
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incidents
dominated the research, in the last period, that
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theft
became the most popular
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crime
in Panama City. While robber remained as the least popular
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crime
during nine years of the research.

In 2010, the
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burglary
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crime
in that
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. From 2010 to 2011, the quantity of
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burglary
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a peak at 3700 cases in 2011. In the
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of 1400 cases in 2019.

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theft
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incidents
were about 2700, which caused a large gap with 600 cases for the robbery
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. In the
next
two years, there are a slight increase in the
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of robbery
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to about 1000 cases, while that
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remain stable compared to the beginning. From 2012 to 2015, both
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in 2019 when compared to the beginning.
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