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THE DIAGRAM DEPICTS THE PROCESS OF RAINWATER STORAGE AND REUSE for drinking and other household purposes in a town of Australia

THE DIAGRAM DEPICTS THE PROCESS OF RAINWATER STORAGE AND REUSE for drinking and other household purposes in a town of Australia bEaEl
THE DIAGRAM DEPICTS THE PROCESS OF RAINWATER STORAGE AND REUSE for drinking and other household purposes in a town of Australia. Overall, the process of turning rain water into consumable water, includes manifold steps. Initially, the rainwater falls on the flat roof of the houses, on the roofs there is an adjoining sliding pipe. This pipe passes the water downward from the houses into the gutter, from where the water is transported to the water filters for refinement. Once filtered, it moves through large storage containers it passes through the water treatment reservoir. At this stage, The water is treated with the cleansing chemicals. THEREFORE, IT CAN BE USED AGAIN AS DRINKING WATER AFTER THIS FINAL STAGE, THE WATE LEADS ALONG THE pipe LINEs TO HOMES FOR PRIMARY USE. All this procedure, except collection of water, happens underneath the ground.
THE DIAGRAM DEPICTS THE PROCESS OF RAINWATER STORAGE AND REUSE for drinking and other household purposes in a town of Australia.
Overall
, the process of turning rain
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water
into consumable
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water
, includes manifold steps.
Initially
, the rainwater falls on the flat roof of the
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houses
, on the roofs there is an adjoining sliding pipe. This pipe passes the
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water
downward from the
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houses
into the gutter, from where the
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water
is transported
to the
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water
filters for refinement. Once filtered, it
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moves
through large storage containers it passes through the
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water
treatment reservoir. At this stage, The
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water
is treated
with the cleansing chemicals.
THEREFORE
, IT CAN BE
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USED
AGAIN AS DRINKING
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WATER
AFTER THIS FINAL STAGE, THE
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WATE
LEADS ALONG THE pipe 
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LINEs
TO HOMES FOR PRIMARY
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USE
. All this procedure, except collection of
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water
, happens underneath the ground.

IELTS academic THE DIAGRAM DEPICTS THE PROCESS OF RAINWATER STORAGE AND REUSE for drinking and other household purposes in a town of Australia

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