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The diagram depicts the population of visitors of one of the Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017.

The diagram depicts the population of visitors of one of the Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017. EN7wx
The diagram depicts the population of visitors of one of the Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the figures representing visitors stayed on cruise ships, on the island both increased with fluctuations over the years, pulling the total number of travelers more than if it tripled the initial amount. Looking closer, it can be seen that the line illustrating the portion of visitors stayed on the island first stayed constant, until 2011 when it gradually surged reaching the peak of 1. 5 million travelers by 2013. Subsequently, the number stayed the same, but it then plummeted after 2015, hitting about 1. 2 million tourists by 2016. Finally, the figures increased back to 1. 5 million visitors in 2017. Another notable feature is that the line interpreted the statistics on visitors stayed on cruise ships had shown fluctuations as well, but increased overall. Opposing the trend in the number of travelers who stayed on cruise ships, which remained unchanged, the figures for visitors who stayed inland experienced a slight rise from about 0. 2 million to 0. 5 million visitors in 2011. Followed by is a drop in amount, returning to its initial value of an estimate 0. 2 million customers. However, the line steep-up as it soared, reaching 2 million in population by 2017. Moreover, the line that shows the total amount of tourists leaped steadily over the years as a result, but the value does once remained constant from 2015 to 2016, staying at approximately 2. 7 million customers. Even though, the figure yet still hit 3. 5 million in 2017 as it skyrocketed.
The diagram depicts the population of
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visitors
of one of the Caribbean islands from 2010 to 2017.

Overall
, the
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figures
representing
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visitors
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stayed
on cruise ships, on the island both increased with fluctuations over the years, pulling the total number of travelers more than if it tripled the initial amount.

Looking closer, it can be
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seen
that the
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line
illustrating the portion of
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visitors
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stayed
on the island
first
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stayed
constant, until 2011 when it
gradually
surged reaching the peak of 1. 5
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million
travelers by 2013.
Subsequently
, the number
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stayed
the same,
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but
it then plummeted after 2015, hitting about 1. 2
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million
tourists by 2016.
Finally
, the
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figures
increased back to 1. 5
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million
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visitors
in 2017.

Another notable feature is that the
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line
interpreted the statistics on
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visitors
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stayed
on cruise ships had shown fluctuations
as well
,
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but
increased
overall
. Opposing the trend in the number of travelers who
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stayed
on cruise ships, which remained unchanged, the
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figures
for
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visitors
who
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stayed
inland experienced a slight rise from about 0. 2
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million
to 0. 5
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million
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visitors
in 2011. Followed by is a drop in amount, returning to its initial value of an estimate 0. 2
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million
customers.
However
, the
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line
steep-up as it soared, reaching 2
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million
in population by 2017.

Moreover
, the
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line
that
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shows
the total amount of tourists leaped
steadily
over the years
as a result
,
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but
the value does once remained constant from 2015 to 2016, staying at approximately 2. 7
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million
customers.
Even though
, the
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figure
yet
still
hit 3. 5
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million
in 2017 as it skyrocketed.
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