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The diagram demonstrates the various steps in the life of a honey bee.

The diagram demonstrates the various steps in the life of a honey bee. 2xXLk

The diagram demonstrates the various steps in the life of a honey bee. Overall, it is also noticeable that there are five stages in the development of honey bees, beginning with eggs and finishing with mature adult insects. First of all, the female adult lays an egg, the female typically lays one or two eggs every three days. Between 9 - 10 days later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears. During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. The moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later and again another 9 days later. 30 - 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting step, and only 4 days later, it reaches full maturity.

The diagram demonstrates the various steps in the life of a honey bee. Overall
, it is also
 noticeable that there are five stages in the development of honey bees, beginning with eggs and finishing with mature adult insects.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the female adult lays an egg, the female typically
 lays one or two eggs every three days. Between Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.9 – 109–10
9 - 10
 days You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnext
later
, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears.

During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. The Possible spelling mistake found.mountingmolting
moulting
first
 takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnext
later
 and again another 9 days You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnext
later
. Consider using an n-dash (half dash), if you want to indicate numerical ranges or time ranges.30 – 3130–31
30 - 31
 days from the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final Possible spelling mistake found.mountingmolting
moulting
 step, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 4 days You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnext
later
, it reaches full maturity. 