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The diagram demonstrates the process in which electricity is made by usage of geothermal energy and the help of water.

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The diagram demonstrates the process in which electricity is made by usage of geothermal energy and the help of water. Overall, the process includes 5 stages starting by heating up cold water to make steam and then using the produced steam for moving the turbines which is needed for powering the generator. The first three steps of the function are done with the purpose of warming the cold water. Firstly, the cold water is transferred to a zone called “the injection wall” which is located 4. 5 km down in the earth. Then by using the heat of hot rocks in the geothermal region, the water heats up and gets to a spot called “the production wall”. At this time, the water pumps up to the earth’s surface and directly enters a condenser. The output of this condenser is steam which gets in a chamber that involves a turbine and an electricity generator. The steam is used to rotate the turbine. The power produced by a rotating turbine is used to produce electricity in the generator.
The diagram demonstrates the process in which electricity
is made
by usage of geothermal energy and the
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help
of water.

Overall
, the process includes 5 stages starting by heating up
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cold
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water
to
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make
steam and then using the produced steam for moving the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
turbines
which
is needed
for powering the generator.

The
first
three steps of the function
are done
with the purpose of warming the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
.
Firstly
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
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water
is transferred
to a zone called “the injection wall” which
is located
4. 5 km down in the earth. Then by using the heat of hot rocks in the geothermal region, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
heats up and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
to a spot called “the production wall”. At this time, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
pumps up to the earth’s surface and
directly
enters a condenser. The output of this condenser is steam which
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gets
in a chamber that involves a
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turbine
and an electricity generator. The steam is
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used
to rotate the
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turbine
.
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The
power produced by a rotating
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turbine
is
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used
to produce electricity in the generator.
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IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates the process in which electricity is made by usage of geothermal energy and the help of water.

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