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geothermal energy and electricity

geothermal energy and electricity PRA0E

The diagram demonstrates the process in which electricity is made by usage of geothermal energy and the help of water. Overall, the process includes 5 stages starting by heating up cold water to make steam and then using the produced steam for moving the turbines which is needed for powering the generator. The first three steps of the function are done with the purpose of warming the cold water. Firstly, the cold water is transferred to a zone called “the injection wall” which is located 4. 5 km down in the earth. Then by using the heat of hot rocks in the geothermal region, the water heats up and gets to a spot called “the production wall”. At this time, the water pumps up to the earth’s surface and directly enters a condenser. The output of this condenser is steam which gets in a chamber that involves a turbine and an electricity generator. The steam is used to rotate the turbine. The power produced by a rotating turbine is used to produce electricity in the generator.

The diagram demonstrates the process in which electricity is made
 by usage of geothermal energy and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of water.

Overall
, the process includes 5 stages starting by heating up This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
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water
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 steam and then using the produced steam for moving the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbines
 which is needed
 for powering the generator.

The first
 three steps of the function are done
 with the purpose of warming the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. Firstly
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is transferred
 to a zone called “the injection wall” which is located
 4. 5 km down in the earth. Then by using the heat of hot rocks in the geothermal region, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 heats up and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 to a spot called “the production wall”. At this time, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 pumps up to the earth’s surface and directly
 enters a condenser. The output of this condenser is steam which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 in a chamber that involves a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbine
 and an electricity generator. The steam is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to rotate the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbine
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 power produced by a rotating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcylindergeneratortransformer
turbine
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to produce electricity in the generator. 