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The chart show the survey buying and drinking habit of coffee and tea in Australia cities

The chart show the survey buying and drinking habit of coffee and tea in Australia cities 75LNn
The bar chart provides the information regarding the proportion of purchasing and consuming habbit of coffee and tea in five various cities of Australia. Overall, it can be evident that the higest percentage of people had habbit went to cafe for coffee and tea. whereas, the proportion of brought instant coffee habbit was the lowest. At a fleeting glance, it can be clearly seen that in the Melbourne and Australia the percentage of purchasing fresh coffee was approximately 42% in both cities. Moreover, buying instant coffee proportion was around 43%. while, in Sydney it was slightly higher, at around 46%. Meanwhile, about 63% residents went to caffe for drinking tea and coffee in Sydney which is considerably higher than that of Melbourne. Movingfurther, in the Brisbane Adler and habbirt the percentage of brought tea and coffee habbit was more than 30%. However, instant coffee percentage in Brisbane were more than half. whereas, inAdler it was a exactly half and in habbirt that was more than 50%
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habbit
of
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coffee
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in five various cities of Australia.
Overall
, it can be evident that the
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higest
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percentage
of
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people
had
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habbit
went to
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cafe
for
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coffee
and
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tea
.
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whereas
, the proportion of brought instant
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coffee
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habbit
was the lowest. At a fleeting glance, it can be
clearly
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seen
that in the Melbourne and Australia the
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percentage
of purchasing fresh
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coffee
was approximately 42% in both cities.
Moreover
, buying instant
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coffee
proportion was around 43%.
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while
, in Sydney it was
slightly
higher, at around 46%. Meanwhile, about 63% residents went to
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caffe
for drinking
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tea
and
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coffee
in Sydney which is
considerably
higher than that of Melbourne.
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Movingfurther
, in the Brisbane Adler and
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habbirt
the
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of brought
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tea
and
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coffee
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habbit
was more than 30%.
However
, instant
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coffee
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in Brisbane were more than half.
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whereas
,
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inAdler
it was
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exactly half and in
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habbirt
that was more than 50%
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