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new model cars production year 2000-2002

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The line graph shows the number of new model cars produced from 2000 to 2002. The initial impression is that the graph had a sharp increase in the beginning and a dramatic decline in the end. It can clearly be seen that there was a slight rise then at the beginning, then the graph had a rapid increas between February and April. After that as can be seen some moderate fluctuations up to October. The number of new model cars produced had a dip and after that remain constant from November to March. There was an upward trend up to October. A peak happend between October and November an more the graph nosedived noticeably in the last three month. .

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 the number of new model cars produced from 2000 to 2002. The initial impression is that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
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 that there was a slight rise then at the beginning, then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
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 between February and April.

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 more the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withchart
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IELTS academic new model cars production year 2000-2002

Academic

American English

3 paragraphs

120 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 5.5

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

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