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The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. pOVy
The give picture show information about the circulation of water in nature from ocean to air to land. Overall, it is clear that there are three particular stages beginning with evaporation of water and ending with the salt water intrusion. Initially, it is estimated about 80 % of water vapour in the air come from ocean. After being heated from the sun, sea water evaporates then water vapour condenses to form clouds. The next step, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow. At the third stage in the cycle, the preciptation may take various path. Some of it may pour into lake or absorbed in the ground. Nevertheless, the others return to the oceans through surface runoff which is made from rainwater creates the groundwater. Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground and reach the impervious layer of the earth. The final stage of process is shown that salt water takes place just before groundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.
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information about the circulation of
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water
in nature from
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ocean
to air to land.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that there are three particular stages beginning with evaporation of
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water
and ending with the salt
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water
intrusion.

Initially
, it
is estimated
about 80 % of
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water
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vapour
in the air
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from
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ocean
. After
being heated
from the sun, sea
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water
evaporates then
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water
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vapour
condenses to form clouds. The
next
step, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow. At the third stage in the cycle, the
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preciptation
may take various path.
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Some
of it may pour into lake or absorbed in the ground.
Nevertheless
, the others return to the
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oceans
through surface runoff which
is made
from rainwater creates the groundwater.
Otherwise
, rainwater may filter through the ground and reach the impervious layer of the earth. The final stage of process
is shown
that salt
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water
takes place
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just
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before
groundwater passes into the
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oceans
to complete the cycle.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

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