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The bar chart illustrates how many hours a teacher spents teaching in 2001 in Primary school, Lower Secondary school or upper secondary school and compares the four countries Japan, Spain, Iceland and USA.

The bar chart illustrates how many hours a teacher spents teaching in 2001 in Primary school, Lower Secondary school or upper secondary school and compares the four countries Japan, Spain, Iceland and USA. RDxM
The bar chart illustrates how many hours a teacher spents teaching in 2001 in Primary school, Lower Secondary school or upper secondary school and compares the four countries Japan, Spain, Iceland and USA. Overall, in all four coutries the number of hours spent in teaching in primay school and lower secondary education are lower than the hours spent in upper seconday school. However, the absolute number of teaching hours varies, comparing the coutries. In Iceland, teachers spent about 470 hours in primary school. The numbers were slightly higher in Japan with 600 hours. In Spain, teachers spent approximately 650 hours for primary school teaching. USA was outracing the other coutries with around 750 hours per year. In lower secondary school the order of coutries stayed the same, although in all four coutries more teaching time compared to the primary school can be seen. In the upper secondary education Japan had the least amount of teaching with 700 hours. Spain's and Iceland's teachers were neary the same amount of hours active in this school type with approximately 900 hours per year. USA exceeds also here with close to 1200 hours of teaching in upper secondary school. The total amount of hours spent in teaching was the hightest in the USA, followed by Japan, Iceland and lastly Spain.
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a teacher

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in 2001 in
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Primary
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, Lower
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Secondary
school

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upper
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secondary
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and compares the four countries
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Japan
, Spain, Iceland and USA.

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primay
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and lower
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education are lower than the
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in
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upper
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seconday
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varies, comparing the
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coutries
.

In Iceland, teachers
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about 470
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in
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. The numbers were
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Japan
with 600
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. In Spain, teachers
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approximately 650
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for
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. USA was outracing the other
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with around 750
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per year. In lower
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the order of
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stayed the same, although in all four
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time compared to the
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In the
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education
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Japan
had the least amount of
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with 700
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. Spain's and Iceland's teachers were
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active in this
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type with approximately 900
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per year. USA exceeds
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was the
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Japan
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates how many hours a teacher spents teaching in 2001 in Primary school, Lower Secondary school or upper secondary school and compares the four countries Japan, Spain, Iceland and USA.

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