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The information about the five countries such as Australia, Usa, Uk, Japan, and China of yearly tourist spending in New Zealand over the Span of eighteen years starting from 1996 is depicted by line graph the data has been calibrated in NZ$Overall, it can be seen that spending of Australia, Uk and Usa was upward trends; however, downward trend seen in the japan and China for the given time of the period. In 1996, the data of Austrian visitor was one thousand that significantly increased for next ten years after that the number decreased slightly in 2008 then rose up and decline in end of the year. The people from usa spending around 800$ in 1996 after that this trend gradually rose up in 2010 around double of it; however, this data fastly decreased in 2014. In addition, the spending amount of uk in 1996 roughly 400$ then slightly decreased in 2002 after that inclined significant in the end of the year. In 1996, the data of Japan around 400$ its' was slightly increased in 2002 after that this trend dramatically fall down in 2014
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