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The bar graph illustrates the spending money in thousand pound sterling on six purchasers products in four European countries.

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Overall, it is evident that although variations had been witnessed throughout the span, yet an overwhelming amount of photographic was unwaged in Britain. However, it was surpassed of CDs and toys in Germany. According, it is clear noticing that British spend more than 170 thousand pounds sterling for photographic films; however, the other countries spent less than Britain. Moreover, Britain also spent more than 160 thousand pounds for buying toys and CDs, which is higher than other nations, France and Italy paid money approximately 160 thousand ponds while Germany spent 145 thousand. Surprisingly, Britain paid for perfumes more than other countries as well, noticeably, spending pattern in France less than Britain but in Italy it was mashroomed, in Germany is was steadily declined. Contrastingly, Britain spent 155 thousand pounds for tennis and personal stereos. Interestingly, France paid around 155 thousand pounds. Furthermore, Italy paid for tennis 155 thousand and for personal stereos 150 thousand. Eventually, in Germany spent their less money for tennis and personal stereos approximately smiliar.
Overall
, it is evident that although variations had
been witnessed
throughout the span,
yet
an overwhelming amount of photographic
was unwaged
in Britain.
However
, it
was surpassed
of CDs and toys in Germany. According, it is
clear
noticing that British spend more than 170 thousand pounds sterling for photographic films;
however
, the other countries
spent
less than Britain.
Moreover
, Britain
also
spent
more than 160 thousand pounds for buying toys and CDs, which is higher than other nations, France and Italy
paid
money approximately 160 thousand ponds while Germany
spent
145 thousand.
Surprisingly
, Britain
paid
for perfumes more than other countries
as well
,
noticeably
, spending pattern in France less than Britain
but
in Italy it was
mashroomed
, in Germany
is was
steadily
declined.
Contrastingly
, Britain
spent
155 thousand pounds for tennis and personal stereos.
Interestingly
, France
paid
around 155 thousand pounds.
Furthermore
, Italy
paid
for tennis 155 thousand and for personal stereos 150 thousand.
Eventually
, in Germany
spent
their less money for tennis and personal stereos approximately
smiliar
.
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