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The chart shows the proportion of young people in the great britain, the USA, Germany and France.

The chart shows the proportion of young people in the great britain, the USA, Germany and France. ELymB

The chart shows the proportion of young people in the great britain, the USA, Germany and France. From the chart, we can see that car used in the great britain and USA is about the same, at 60%. Meanwhile, in Germany the proportion is only 40%. Unlike Germany, the proportion of car travel in France is almost double that of Germany, reaching 70%. We found that cars are the most common mode of transport in all countries except Germany. Motorcycle was the least popular type of transport in all countries, except for the USA. In USA, the proportion of traveling by bicycle reaches 30%, but in other countries such as great britain, Germany and France, the proportion is very low, only about 10% to 20%. In which, England and France have the same proportion. In the great britain and Germany, cycling rates are quite high, reaching between 30% and 43%. In Germany, the proportion of people choosing cars and bicycles is about the same. while in the USA and France only 10% to 15%, only a very small amount compared to the rest of the countries. Overall, car is the most chosen transport, bicycle is on the second place and motorcycle is the least chosen transport.

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