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The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. 56bmB
The graph illustrates the phase of manufacture matches has several stages before packing. In the first phase, a tree log is placed in a peeler to blade the log in a thin layer called a veneer. The veneer proceeds to the chopper, which cuts into small equal sticks in size. Afterward, the sticks watered in an ammonium phosphate tank. Then, they moved in a round dryer. Next, the matches were placed into a hopper and passed through the metal duct, and fell into the storage area. In the second phase, the matches dropped from the storage area to a funnel-shaped tube into a perforated steel belt. This belt passes through three tanks. The matches soaked into the first paraffin wax tank, then based chemicals tank, and last tip chemicals tank. Afterward, the belt loops up and down through the drying area. The final phase, after the matches are well dried. Now they are ready to be packaged.
The graph illustrates the
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phase
of manufacture
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matches
has several stages
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before
packing.

In the
first
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phase
, a tree log
is placed
in a peeler to blade the log in a thin layer called a veneer. The veneer proceeds to the chopper, which
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cuts
into
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small
equal sticks in size. Afterward, the sticks watered in an ammonium phosphate
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tank
. Then, they
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moved
in a round dryer.
Next
, the
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matches
were placed
into a hopper and passed through the metal duct, and fell into the storage area.

In the second
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phase
, the
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matches
dropped from the storage area to a funnel-shaped tube into a perforated steel belt. This belt passes through three
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tanks
. The
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matches
soaked into the
first
paraffin wax
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tank
, then based chemicals
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tank
, and last tip chemicals
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tank
. Afterward, the belt loops up and down through the drying area.

The final
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phase
, after the
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matches
are well dried.
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Now
they are ready to
be packaged
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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