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The percentages of the changing pattern of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK

The percentages of the changing pattern of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK bYD76

The graph provides information about the trends of which modern technology people in the UK use in their home from 1996 to 2003. All the trends of modern technology: CD player, Home computer, Internet access, and Mobile phone are upward. There were gradual rises in the trends of CD player (from 60% in 1996/97 to around 80% in 2002/03) and Home computer (from around 30% in 1996/97 to about 50% in 2002/03). As regards Internet and Mobile phone, however, there were some sudden increases. Since the introduction of Internet around 1998 in the UK, there had been a sudden increase in the percentage until 2001, from 10% to 30%, and then, it went up slightly but constantly (from 30% in 2001/01 to above 40% in 2002/03). Likewise, the trend of Mobile phone rose steadily first. After that, there were two sudden increases from 1998/99 to 2002/03. It is noticeable that the number of people who introduced Home computer and Mobile phone in their daily lives had risen suddenly for a short span.

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