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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 0Apk1
The graphs illustrate the percentage of water used in six different areas of the world for different reasons. The chart shows three purposes for water uses. First, the highest percentage of water used is for agricultural purposes. Areas like South America, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia spend almost between 71% to 88%, while North America and Europe spend only between 32% and 39% on the water for the same reason. Secondly, comes an industrial reason, areas like North America and Europe use most water for this reason. They spend water almost between 48% and 53%. On the flip side, areas like South East Asia, and South America spend water between 10% and 12%. And areas like Africa and Central Asia spend only between 7% and 5% of water in industry. The last and the least percentage of water used for domestic purposes. From the greatest areas to the least areas in using water in domestic are North America, South America, and Europe send water between 13% to 19%, while areas like Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia spend only by maximum 9%. Overall, most areas use more water for agricultural purposes compared to industrial and domestic purposes.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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