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the diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes

the diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes BJgj9

The process diagram illustrates the way how cement is produced and how cement is used in concrete production. As can be seen in the first figure, during cement production, limestone and clay are first passed through a grinder and powder. Afterwards it goes through many stages, respectively: mixer-rotating heater-heat. It is then passed through a grinder, after which the cement is ready. At the end it is collected in bags. In contrast, the process of making concrete is easier than making cement. All ingredients are added to the concrete mixer and then mixed. The main ingredients are 50% gravel and 25% sand, respectively. The residue contains 15% cement and 10% water. After mixing these ingredients, concrete will be produced. There are several stages to produce cement with mixer, heater, and grinder, while the main step to concrete production is to put all the ingredients into a concrete mixer. Therefore, we can see that cement production is way more complicated than making concrete.

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end
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added
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ingredients
 are 50% gravel and 25% sand, respectively
. The residue contains 15% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and 10% water. After mixing these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfactoradditivepieceelement
ingredients
, concrete will be produced
.

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cement
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ingredients
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see
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 production is way more complicated than making concrete. 