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These bar chart and pie chart demonstrate percentage of reasons for travel and the most important challenges of travelling public. Overall, the chief reason of travelling is commuting from home to workplace among five regarded reasons. Also, the price of travel and the Aggressive drivers are countered as the main issues for travelling public. Given the bar chart, slightly less than a half of reasons is because of the To and from work case and it is dramatically different even from second reason, the Personal reasons with 30% difference. However, the lowest presented rate is The visiting friends/relatives with 6%. On the other hand, the price of travel with 36% rate is dramatically separated from other issues. The Space for pedestrians with 6% has the lowest rate among other issues. In conclusion, the high price of public transport is not affordable specially for the workers that have a great share of daily travel.
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of travelling is commuting from home to workplace among five regarded
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, the Personal
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with 30% difference.
However
, the lowest presented rate is The visiting friends/relatives with 6%.
On the other hand
, the price of
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travel
with 36% rate is
dramatically
separated from other issues. The Space for pedestrians with 6% has the lowest rate among other issues.

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3 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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