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The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016. OVyWN
The graphical representation showing the prioritization by the business companies, which was in year 2016. All values are in percentage. For the 0 to 25 employees, 71% of them is to the converting contacts to customer and increasing number of contacts, whereas increasing revenue from existing customer, providing ROI of marketing activities and reducing the cost of contact acquisition stands at 43%, 33% and 20% respectively. When it comes to the employees 26 to 200 the converting contacts to customer and increasing number of contacts got increased by 2% and 8% respectively. Not only these two but also increasing revenue from existing customer, providing ROI of marketing activities and reducing the cost of contact acquisition got increased by 4%, 14% and 6% respectively, however when it comes to the 200 or more employees the converting contacts to customer and increasing number of contacts dropped down to the 66% and 62% individually. And increasing revenue from existing customer, providing ROI of marketing activities and reducing the cost of contact acquisition got increased 55%, 58% and 30% separately. To conclude, the converting contacts to customer and increasing number of contacts had their ups and downs but, in the end, the converting contacts to customer leads with the highest percentage of 66%.
The graphical representation showing the prioritization by the business
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, which was in year 2016. All values are in percentage.

For the 0 to 25 employees, 71% of them is to the
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converting
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contacts
to
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customer
and
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increasing
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number
of
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contacts
, whereas
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increasing
revenue from existing
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customer
, providing ROI of marketing activities and reducing the cost of
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contact
acquisition stands at 43%, 33% and 20%
respectively
. When it
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comes
to the employees 26 to 200 the
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converting
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contacts
to
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customer
and
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increasing
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number
of
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contacts
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got
increased by 2% and 8%
respectively
. Not
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only
these two
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also
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increasing
revenue from existing
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customer
, providing ROI of marketing activities and reducing the cost of
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contact
acquisition
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got
increased by 4%, 14% and 6%
respectively
,
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when it
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comes
to the 200 or more employees the
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converting
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contacts
to
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customer
and
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increasing
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number
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contacts
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increasing
revenue from existing
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customer
, providing ROI of marketing activities and reducing the cost of
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contact
acquisition
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got
increased 55%, 58% and 30%
separately
.

To conclude
, the
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converting
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customer
and
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increasing
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had their ups and downs
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end
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leads with the highest percentage of 66%.
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