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The bar chart illustrates  the product category that exported in  one regions during the period between  2015 and 2016, while the table represents the  percentage change in each type of  exports in this year.

The bar chart illustrates the product category that exported in one regions during the period between 2015 and 2016, while the table represents the percentage change in each type of exports in this year. Qq0y
The bar chart illustrates  the product category that exported in  one regions during the period between  2015 and 2016, while the table represents the  percentage change in each type of  exports in this year. Overall,   there  was a huge increased in the number of   petroleum products from 2015 and  2016, as about  more than 55%, however textiles had  less than 30 percent of export earnings. The totall number of  percentage in each kind of  products from 2015 and 2016 were rosed  apploximately to 32%. By the lage margin, we can noticed that a huge number of earning products went to petroleum products and  engineered goods and they reached  to 60 %, in contraste  this number  decreased to a half in  both agricultural  products and textiles. In  2016 Gemes  and jewellery exported far fewer than the products in  2015. Between 2015 and 2016, textiles were the popular percentage of exports which had 15. 24% of the each number of products, followed by engeneered goods (8. 5%), games and jewellery (5. 18%), petroleum products (3%), and lastly agricultural products  with just 0. 81%.
The bar chart illustrates
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the
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product
category that exported in
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one regions
during the period between
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2015 and 2016, while the table represents the
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percentage
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change
in each type of
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exports in this year.

Overall
,
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there
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was a huge increased in the
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number
of
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petroleum
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products
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from 2015 and  2016
, as about
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more than 55%,
however
textiles had
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less than 30 percent of export earnings. The
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totall
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number
of
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percentage in each kind of
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products
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from 2015 and 2016
were
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rosed
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apploximately
to 32%.

By the
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lage
margin, we can
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noticed
that a huge
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number
of earning
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products
went to petroleum
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products
and
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engineered
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goods and
they reached
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to 60 %, in
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contraste
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this number
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decreased to a half in
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both agricultural
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products
and textiles. In
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2016
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Gemes
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and
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jewellery
exported far fewer than the
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products
in
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2015.

Between 2015 and 2016, textiles were the popular percentage of exports which had 15. 24% of
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the each
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products
, followed by
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engeneered
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goods
(8. 5%), games and
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jewellery
(5. 18%), petroleum
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products
(3%), and
lastly
agricultural products
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with
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just
0. 81%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the product category that exported in one regions during the period between 2015 and 2016, while the table represents the percentage change in each type of exports in this year.

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