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The table below shows the percentage of population and the types of house they live in three area of city

The table below shows the percentage of population and the types of house they live in three area of city dOKd
The table provides information about the ratio of the population and types of the house such as Flat, Terraced, Semi-detached and Detached they live in 3 parts of city. Overall we can see Central area of a city population was highest while green pack part ratio was lower. In Central part of city people live in flat proportion watch lowest. In green park area of a city individuals living in apartment ratio was more than 70% while detached ratio was lower than 10%. Moreover, in green park area people live in terraced and semi-detached rates were 14%, 5% respectively. In Central part of a city people live in house ratio was highest and it was 39 % while flat the portion was lowest up to 15%. Furthermore, terraced house rate was 18% and semi detached ratio 28%. In Southberg area population was 32000 IIT lower than Central part. People live in flat at South part ratio was 25% and detached house proportion 14%. Moreover, individuals live in terraced home ratio was higher upto 56% while semi detached house rate 5%.
The table provides information about the
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of the population and types of the
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house
such as
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Flat
, Terraced, Semi-detached and
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Detached
they
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parts
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Central
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of a city population was
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while green pack
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part
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ratio
was lower. In
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Central
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part
of city
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people
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live
in
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flat
proportion
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lowest.

In green park
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area
of a city individuals living in apartment
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ratio
was more than 70% while
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detached
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ratio
was lower than 10%.
Moreover
, in green park
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area
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people
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live
in terraced and semi-detached rates were 14%, 5%
respectively
. In
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Central
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part
of a city
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people
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live
in
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house
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ratio
was highest and it was 39 % while
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flat
the portion was lowest up to 15%.
Furthermore
, terraced
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rate was 18% and semi
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detached
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ratio
28%.

In
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Southberg
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population was 32000 IIT lower than
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Central
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part
.
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People
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in
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at South
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part
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ratio
was 25% and
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detached
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house
proportion 14%.
Moreover
, individuals
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live
in terraced home
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ratio
was higher
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upto
56% while semi
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detached
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house
rate 5%.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of population and the types of house they live in three area of city

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